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| Patricia Louise 2008-03-11 ch 1,  | abuseBeautiful winter imagery. My toes actually got cold as I read it. I love some of the metaphors in this. |
| Falaba Todd 2008-02-09 ch 1, | abuseI love it! I'm sorry it took me like ten years to read it, but I haven't been online lately. I've been sort of dead. Very awesome, though. Kudos. Regards, Ari |
| Militant Poet 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseYour description is excellent, and I enjoy your choice of images. Good work. |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI like the repetition and the imagery.. great piece |
| storykeeper 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusePretty! I like it... If only our snow lasted more than three hours, but I it's better than none. |