 Patricia Louise 2008-03-11 . chapter 1Beautiful winter imagery. My toes actually got cold as I read it. I love some of the metaphors in this. |
 Professor Doctor 2008-02-09 . chapter 1I love it!
I'm sorry it took me like ten years to read it, but I haven't been online lately. I've been sort of dead.
Very awesome, though.
Kudos.
Regards,
Ari |
 Militant Poet 2008-01-28 . chapter 1Your description is excellent, and I enjoy your choice of images. Good work. |
 simpleplan13 2008-01-25 . chapter 1I like the repetition and the imagery.. great piece |
 storykeeper 2008-01-23 . chapter 1Pretty! I like it... If only our snow lasted more than three hours, but I it's better than none. |