wow! very nice and full of emotion and angst, I like it :)

by the way, thanks for your review of my story. sorry it took me a while to return the favor!

Well, it's full of emotion, that's for sure. It's full of anguish, and despair, almost as if giving up on life. The images you showed were very...well, graphic, and it paints this really creepy/emo painting in my mind. :)

you have great imagery. and i love the structure of the poem, how short every line is. yay :0