Well, I like the story :) But the ending was a little too depressing for my taste.

I think it is about -4 degrees celsius :)

I just finished reading this story and I feel like I should review, because I did read it all the way through, but I am not quite sure what to say. I liked the story, the characters and your writing style, but the ending was ... I don't know ... not what I was expecting. I honestly can't describe my feelings past that.

Hmm I liked this. Although I want to know what happened between this chapter and the last chapter XD how much time had passed? Things like that. Good job! I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Faith

I really hope there will be a sequel. It is just too sad to leave them like this T_T

I just want to say:

I LOVE THIS STORY!

and also:

ArGH this is making me not study for my test! I'm going to FAIL! T_T But I can't stop reading X_X

Wow, that was a really intense ending, which is perfect for this wonderfully unique and creative story. The last line was very sudden and kind of ambiguous, which I usually don't like, but it seemed to work here. It leaves you with a sense that Gary will never be happy and has no hope-which is depressing, but the way you described his despair was absolutely beautiful. The best part of your writing is the emotions it evokes; you have an enormous talent for that. I was super impressed by this story. Good job!

Thanks for the update! That was a crazy ending that really needed to happen. I feel no sympathy for Lucian but I wonder what Gary will do now.

I'm not cheering you up.

Jerk.

If you want to be cheered up listen to The Offspring.

Growl

Damn another of my faves is over. I'm loseing good storys to read. I cant wait for more storys about gary and lucian.

Dramatic! Aw, no, not Torn! I loved him ): I feel so bad. Keep it up and update soon, this was an awesome chapter.
Faith

I'm going to cut you.

That is what I said when I finished the chapter and didn't see another chapter up.

You should know if I want to read THEN I WANT TO F-ING READ! Jesus!

Wow... Gary cause a massacre, of course it was Lucian's doing, but Gary could have stopped it by handing himself over, but no he has be a self brat.
But i still sympathize with him.
I mean if i were in the same situation, i wouldn't want to return to that, but i don't think (i hope i wouldn't) Put my own freedom over others live, especially those close to me.
But you never know until it happens to you.
This chapter held me enthralled, it was so good.
I can't wait for the final chapter, i really wanna she how this whole thing ends.
Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the update. I can't believe its almost over. This was an intense chapter.

Man I can't wait for the next chapter. Will there be any survivors.