Aww...that's so sad. Poor Natalie. (Coincidentally, Natalie is the name of my sister!) It shows exactly what happens when driving drunk.

First things first; Absolutley spectatacular! On the other hand... More angst! Aren't we a pair! I'm the sarcastic, unsociable cynic, yet you're the one writing all the Angst. You on the other hand are the cheerful, bubbly, generally sociable girl who gets tonnes of crushes, yet I'm the one writing Romance! I think we both have Multiple Personality Disorder.

-Shakes head and grins-

Like I said, spectacular, but I would suggest proof-reading for grammar errors. Also, tweak the summary a bit, because this one doesn't really fit the mood.

Another great poem Luthy!