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| DemonicAngelicVampire 2008-09-21 ch 12,  | abuselol, nice!! love it! favs |
| NaokiAoumori 2008-09-16 ch 12, | abuseGreat story! I can't wait to read the sequel! |
| jma 2008-08-26 ch 12, | abuseGreat story! It was a real treat. I hope you meant what you said a few chapters ago and will give Joe his own story... hopefully a gay one? -crosses fingers- |
| xxxmusic is lifexxx 2008-08-11 ch 12, | abuseOMIGOSH! This was AWESOME! I NEEDS the sequal! I'm gonna go check to see if it's up yet, but if it's not, I shall be checking for it... Often. I LURVED THIS STORY! |
| silverdragon4736 2008-08-01 ch 12, | abuseHilarious! Brilliant! |
| Sasquatch 2008-05-07 ch 12, | abuseloved it! |
| shuushuu 2008-04-15 ch 12, | abusegorgeous story, just read it from start to finish in one sitting, it was that good. very beautifully written and i love the way that flynn wasn't the bad guy. gotta say that devin was ma favorite character, how coud he not be. But seeing as i normally have hatred for main characters in story, i found myself adoring West aswell. Im so gald that there is gonna be a sequel, can't wait to read it!! thanks so much for restoring my wavering faith in love - this totally brightened up my very dull week!! x |
| Qzz 2008-04-09 ch 12, | abuseno...not a crappy ending, a rather good ending. I'm happy to know that there will be a sequel. but sad to see this story end. Thankyou for your wonderful story! :) |
| Qzz 2008-04-09 ch 11, | abusewoah! finally. :) wonderful chapter! |
| Liviania 2008-04-09 ch 12, | abuseAw, I like happy endings. And I'm glad Flynn will be returning in the sequel. Livi |
| Esquirella 2008-04-07 ch 12, | abuseI think they should turn the tables on Joe and Iris. |
| Duuude 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abuseThe ending is so not crappy. In fact this story is so good that I read all of it right now! And I must say it was fabulous! I liked Flynn a lot but I guess he had to be sacrificed for the greater good. XD That sounds really weird. I LOVE Devin though... he and Iris are so funny together. And West used to say they were childish and immature but they were having so much more fun than he was that way! I'm glad Devin and him are together! God I was waiting for that since the beginning. The ending's like ridiculously happy but I like it that way! I thought you'd put Joe and Iris together but then that'd be way too... I don't know cliche. Beautiful story. |
| Ty Taco 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abuseI LOVE IT!! Amazing ending. I can't wait for the sequel. LOVE LOVE LOVE, xoxoxo, Ty |
| gummybaby 2008-04-06 ch 12, | abuseWhy would someone not like your story? It's awesome. Congrats on finishing it too. I'm so happy there's going to be a sequel, can't wait! I will mention one thing I noticed throughout the story. You seem to be a dialogue heavy writer, which is cool cuz I am too, but remember it's important to keep a balance between dialogue and narrative. |
| Sima Raitt 2008-04-06 ch 9, | abuseAgain, had to use another chapter. xD Alli is my name, and I suggested it cause I loves Joe. |