Ooh, yay! I really liked it! And it gave me some inspiration to work on my NaNoWriMo piece which involves two guys who nearly hate eachother and they end of falling for eachother.

Whee! :D I loved it! So much! Some of it was a little difficult to read (with all the dialogue but not knowing who was speaking 100% of the time) but besides that OH MY GOODNESS! :D So much love. *hearts* Fantastic, wonderful, brilliant! ^^

That was perfect delightful lovely I'm so happy and so going to read the sequel.

Don't worry about long enough arms. Arms go forever in cyberspace, and when you can't hug us we hug you back. *huge love-crazed squeeze and platonic lip smack*

*huge resounding squeal of joy echoes off mountaintops and shatters glass for miles*

Yes! Yes! *pumps arm in air in vistory* YES!! They finally kissed each other!!

*grin* Excellent job. Kudos.

Aw!! *cries sadtears for all the boys and Iris*

You're story is very effective because it's very real. This is the kind of pain we really go through. It's hard, but it's great, though. I look forwards to seeing where you take this. Blessings be.

*wipes tear smudges away* Very good job. *sniff* Very beautiful. Tastefully handled.

Oh man, this is fantastic! I'm scheming just as hard as iris and Joe to see those two together- my face actually hurts from how much I've been smiling as I read this.

This is great! I love the way your people interact, it's very down-to-earth and real. I'm severely hooked on this already. Good job, fellow wordpainter.

What a good beginning. You've set a good background, solid characters, interesting details; I love the angst factor. Good work, looking forwards to the rest.

This story is so cute, and I love it :) But I can't help but wonder why you refer to Iris as Jean randomly sometimes? maybe i'm just confused, idk...

Aw, cute. I really love Devin. I don't know why, but I do. Great story.

That was so cute! I read it straight through literally ALL night until 9:58 in the morning. My sleeping schedule is so screwed up now, but reading your story was so worth it! ^^ I felt so sorry for Flynn. I pray that he finds his true guy. =] I really liked Devin the most. He was my favorite. And normally in slash stories I dislike all girls no matter what, but I still loved Iris. I could not help but laugh at her attitude and words. I love all of your characters! xD I hope you do write that sequel, if just for Flynn's sake. Good luck!

Cute story, keep up the good work.

lol, nice!! love it!


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Great story! I can't wait to read the sequel!