Reviews for Wild Wonderful West Virginia

a silenced revolution 2008-03-31 ch 1,	abuseWhen I was a child I always wanted to go to West Virginia, and reading this, I think I remember why. The somewhat surprising word choice works well I think in conveying the imagery. I'm not quite sure what 'whoopla' means. 'regardles' in the first line should be "regardless", and "all warm mammalian" should be "mammalians" as well, unless I'm missing something. Other than that, nice.
simpleplan13 2008-01-25 ch 1,	abuseShe is no women.. Im guessing you used is no instead of is not as a poetic device... im not sure I like it, but I understand however shouldn't it be woman? I like the alliteration a lot.. its really great... the imagery nice and it makes me wish I could see it