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| Moondog Dozier 2008-02-03 ch 1,  | abuseExcellent sound and concept. The visualization makes this work so well. Good write. MD:77. |
| 1Wanderer 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting concept. I liked the uniqueness of your imagery. Thank you for your review. |
| sylvia's syndrome 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseNice work. I like your choice of the word “flow” rather than “float” (which seems like a more obvious/comon word to go with). I think “flow” creates a stronger sense of motion. Keep up the good work! |