Keep him he's intresting:) update now

Hehe, I kinnda want them to get into a fight. Ya'know like lunnar hits eclips then the fight then one thing leads to anther... Get my drift;) but I dealt want to see them fight! How fun would that be!?

That was def. left at a cliffy...lol loving the story...will read other chapters later i need to work on mine...write on!

im glad that you strayed away from the whole mess about how ..vampires cant go in the sun... or vampires hate garlick (ITS A VEGETABLE!) LOL and the wooden stake thing...like you said, if you gab a wooden stake through anyones heart it will kill them lol again...cant wait to read more..its funny

So far I really like this story...its funny at times, has enough action and drama. The only thing that you may have to do is proof read it one more time...(there is a spell check on here) just to make it more understandable.. but still great story and who doesnt make mistakes...no one...i know lol but still great story cant wait to read more.

this really good...
please write more
I wonder what will happen next...

Omg, I am loving this story! I read it all today. XD

Can't wait for the next chapter. :3

I LOVE how you're not using the classic dracula style vampire cliches. They're so much less wimpy without all those random weaknesses! Keep up the great work!

This seems pretty good so far. I like that fact that you openly admit that you're making stuff up as you go along. Most pro's don't even leave postscripts saying that they took a quite a bit of liberty when writing or drawing which can cause lots of confusion when random stuff shows up. I hope to see more soon.

i would love to keep reading! please update as soon as you can! it's so good.

A vampire shonen ai? wicked XD cant wait to read more!!

A very different yet interesting take on vampire stories. :-) I'm really looking forward to read the next installment. Well done! n_~*

Sorry about coming down on you so hard about this story. Now that I've got things straightened out with you I think I can enjoy this a little better.

It's just that, there are so many bad fictions out here concerning vampires that it's kind of painful to read. I am glad, however that your story is not like that.

Thanks for hearing me out.

lol where'd he get John from? I love fics that have shonen-ai and vampires! This is great! Update soon! Do you draw? I'd like to see what Lunar and Eclipse look like and I'm just curious about whether maybe you drew pics of them?

Nice story you have here. I posted one myself. Hope you continue with your writings.