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| Daughter of the Faeries 2008-01-24 ch 1,  | abuseI love the comparison to a dog starting in the second stanza. It really made the poem stand out. The last line is especially good, and I think that though it is talking about submission, rather than resistance like the rest of the poem, it fit in very well. Great job! Daughter of the Faeries |
| A Minion Named Onion 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abusethe last line really sunk the whole feeling of the poem into place for me. i felt like, the first stanza, i've heard this before, but then the second stanza, particularly starting from the fourth line, it gave it a context, and then the last stanza gave it a purpose. and the very last line...yeah. nice job |