and this

this... i really do like this. she says she wanted to tell him he's a stealer and i feel like i need to say things like that to people. say my mind.

thanks for your review, too. :)

I love this so fucking much.

I love delving into the main character's psyche.

Kudos.

Cheers )

Very very intriguing. I like the idea of prose poetry, and I think you did well here. The epilogue! That's just fantastic. I love that. I like that he looked like a "stealer" rather than a "thief." Adds to the charm, the naturalness of the poem. Very nice. Keep writing! :)