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X-Romantic-X 2008-02-10 ch 1,	abuseAw, thats so romantic lol. I was smiling all the way through that. Good job!
simpleplan13 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseI liked the piece a lot, but there were a few lines that stuck out at me as sounding off... You’re my never giving umbrella... I think by never giving you mean it doesn't give in, but it kinda sounds like the umbrella doesnt give you anything... Maybe my indestructible umbrella or something along those lines I know I’m young and ignorant to love... I'm too young.. to love or I'm young... for love Instead, a ground that comes a part.. apart In three words, not two,... that seemed redundant Other than that I really liked it... the images you have in there with the umbrella and the hole in your world, etc. are really great... the part about wanting your moments to go slower and even just having him as an enemy was really good too, but my favorite part was the phrase "every image is painful"
Alexandria Smith 2008-01-29 ch 1,	abuseWow. That is a very powerful poem... and the analagies... amazing. I loved the ending... and the whole of everything... it was excellent. Perfect job. I really enjoyed reading this. It always makes me anxious to read a new poem of yours. Alexandria Smith
buster queston 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseNormally you wouldn’t find me reading a poem, but the title and the fact that you’re only twelve drew me in. I wish I could find words to express the sense of longing that, not only filled your poem, but spilled out into me. Bravo.
Leafeus 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseThis is the kind of thing they put in books of poetry... keep writing like this and your name will definitely spread as your age increases. Just remember, love is a human emotion and, as such, likes to wear masks. Meaning, take your time and don't be tricked. ~A sharp mind is a tool and a weapon; use it. ~Leafeus Agamemnon

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