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Reviews For: Girl on the Bus
Dames
2008-02-09
ch 1, anon.		abuseHow many love affairs have I had while riding on a bus? You capture the flash of attraction so beautifully. I can see the rabbit eyes darting anywhere but THERE.
she smolders
2008-01-26
ch 1, 		abuseThe honesty in your words and the language used gives this poem such depth. I look forward to reading more of your refreshing style of writing.
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