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| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseand he said that? that is so cute!! How lucky you are! xKristie Mariex |
| electric feel 2008-03-28 ch 1, | abusei love when quotes become poetry |
| simpleplan13 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abusevery sweet and relateable.. a great description of love.. the only thing I might change is the second line... repeating feel after feeling seemed odd to me... maybe change it to absolute safety or something along those lines, but thats just my opinion... the piece is still excellent |
| chocobabeh 2008-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuse>.> is not... |
| Artemis Anderson 2008-01-28 ch 1, | abuseAw..now that's sweet d:) |
| Camilleta 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusebut it is. |
| chocobabeh 2008-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abusethis just came out randomly, it wasn't supposed to be poetry xD |