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XxXKristie marieXxX
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseand he said that? that is so cute!! How lucky you are!


xKristie Mariex
electric feel
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abusei love when quotes become poetry
simpleplan13
2008-01-31
ch 1,
abusevery sweet and relateable.. a great description of love.. the only thing I might change is the second line... repeating feel after feeling seemed odd to me... maybe change it to absolute safety or something along those lines, but thats just my opinion... the piece is still excellent
chocobabeh
2008-01-29
ch 1, anon.
abuse>.>

is not...
Artemis Anderson
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseAw..now that's sweet d:)
Camilleta
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abusebut it is.
chocobabeh
2008-01-25
ch 1, anon.
abusethis just came out randomly, it wasn't supposed to be poetry xD
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