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| rust phoenix 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful and very real. The style and the emotion fit together perfectly. I especially like the paragraph about going to the movie. |
| fairytale failure 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD This is fabulous. Probably because it came from the heart but, even so, it feelslike a story to me, with a beautiful bittersweet ending. I liked 'I told her I had plenty of sunshine' and the whole paragraph about the kiss. It's such a romantic idea. |
| Hide Your Eyes 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abuseoh, break my heart, why don't you. This is so beautiful and going on my favorites RIGHT NOW. summer is such a killer. |
| Dorkie 2008-02-01 ch 1, | abusethis was great... it's very lyrical and beautiful. |
| Carousel Chorus 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE THIS! Oh, wow. Im speechless. Plus Favs. |
| xfail 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is very true, you know? I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this, because it happens to so many people and the brief way you've described it seems to go with the short life of the relationship. Good work, once again! |