Short and sweet and sad.

I like the linebreaks

and the story even more.

Wonderful.

i really like this, though i'm not totally sure why.

i think it's how easily you convey the message, even though you don't use a thousand adjectives or [even words].

you write like some poets create poetry. i'm not sure what it is, but maybe it's the way you compare things, and the way you form sentences.

i fell in love with "i think the screen exploded, or at least my heart did."

This is beautiful and very real. The style and the emotion fit together perfectly. I especially like the paragraph about going to the movie.

OH MY GOD

This is fabulous. Probably because it came from the heart but, even so, it feelslike a story to me, with a beautiful bittersweet ending. I liked 'I told her I had plenty of sunshine' and the whole paragraph about the kiss. It's such a romantic idea.

oh, break my heart, why don't you.

This is so beautiful and going on my favorites RIGHT NOW.

summer is such a killer.

this was great... it's very lyrical and beautiful.

I LOVE THIS! Oh, wow. Im speechless. Plus Favs.

This is very true, you know? I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this, because it happens to so many people and the brief way you've described it seems to go with the short life of the relationship. Good work, once again!