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rust phoenix
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseThis is beautiful and very real. The style and the emotion fit together perfectly. I especially like the paragraph about going to the movie.
fairytale failure
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abuseOH MY GOD
This is fabulous. Probably because it came from the heart but, even so, it feelslike a story to me, with a beautiful bittersweet ending. I liked 'I told her I had plenty of sunshine' and the whole paragraph about the kiss. It's such a romantic idea.
Hide Your Eyes
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseoh, break my heart, why don't you.
This is so beautiful and going on my favorites RIGHT NOW.
summer is such a killer.
Dorkie
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abusethis was great... it's very lyrical and beautiful.
Carousel Chorus
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI LOVE THIS! Oh, wow. Im speechless. Plus Favs.
xfail
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseThis is very true, you know? I think a lot of people will be able to relate to this, because it happens to so many people and the brief way you've described it seems to go with the short life of the relationship. Good work, once again!
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