That's really pretty. I like it because those are all the places I find beautiful.

I like the italisized words, too. Emphasis, emphasis.

Ooh. Beautiful. You write things that make me WISH I had talent! Haha.

This is beautiful. Sometimes it seems like you've taken the line between poetry and prose and blurred it, as I've seen you do often in your 100 Words For 100 Days. This is very poetric, yet reading it feels almost like following a train of thought. Beautiful work!