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| R.E.D. the animator 2008-01-25 ch 1,  | abuseWhy is it that most of life's elixirs tast like cough syrup? Oh yeah, and you forgot to add an "r" at the end of your on the last line. |
| fatbird33 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusei liked the big metaphor, creative |