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| Bob Evans 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseI prefer Doomsday clocks... |
| R.E.D. the animator 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseI'm hoping that by the time I get old technology will be advanced enough that I won't have to die. Or that I'll at least be able to wind the death clock back a few decades. |
| fatbird33 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abusei like how in your summary it said "it's digital" this made me smile. and i liked the style of it. i don't know if you did this on purpose, but how the last few lines weren't many words really added to the affect of the poem. |