I love the alliteration in the first line and the assonance in the second. Somehow they give an almost magical start to the poem which contrasts wonderfully with the way you end it with the image of the razor.

I really love the way you use enjambment in the second stanza - it works extremely well. I do think it is undermined by the fact that you don't put punctaution at the end of lines that clearly aren't run-on lines.

Pretty and mysterious.

I like the style of your poetry.

it's pretty, in a sombre sort of way. :)

I enjoy how you use your images to develop a thematic point, which is often missing from poetry. Excellent work!

the imagery is wonderful and I love the razor metaphor.. its very powerful

Lovely, as always. :D

The night is beautiful, isn't it? The darkness is so comforting. Great poem.

I love this one... Really great! And not terribly cliché, believe me!^^

Great job!