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Reviews For: My Own Cocktail

Ardie
2008-06-25
ch 1,
abuseinteresting im still a little lost for words
Xalga
2008-04-13
ch 1,
abuseYou really do have a sense for comparing things.
simpleplan13
2008-03-27
ch 1,
abuseI like this... the descriptions were really beautiful, though I bit inconsistent since I had a cocktail in my mind and then you threw wine at me... lol But still it's really nicely done.
StrawberrySocks1234567
2008-02-08
ch 1,
abusewow, I think I need sex on the beach...THE DRINK! God, perverts...lmao!
KnittingKneedle
2008-02-05
ch 1,
abuseI think I'd prefer the cocktail!!

Lol kidding, I thought this was a nice, simple and humorous poem. The 'cinnammon skin' and strawberry lips were a little cliched, but I enjoyed the links between men and cocktails- it's a sort of love poem I'd never seen before so well done for being original
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