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| Ardie 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseinteresting im still a little lost for words |
| Xalga 2008-04-13 ch 1, | abuseYou really do have a sense for comparing things. |
| simpleplan13 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseI like this... the descriptions were really beautiful, though I bit inconsistent since I had a cocktail in my mind and then you threw wine at me... lol But still it's really nicely done. |
| StrawberrySocks1234567 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abusewow, I think I need sex on the beach...THE DRINK! God, perverts...lmao! |
| KnittingKneedle 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseI think I'd prefer the cocktail!! Lol kidding, I thought this was a nice, simple and humorous poem. The 'cinnammon skin' and strawberry lips were a little cliched, but I enjoyed the links between men and cocktails- it's a sort of love poem I'd never seen before so well done for being original |