This keeps getting more and more interesting. Kagura is growing to be my favorite character.

Man, I feel sorry for Kagura. And Yuusuke, and Ryuu, and... Well not so much Kichiro. He was pretty unfazed.

Oo, boy Kagura wearing dresses, attending contest where boys vie for her, the president having an interest in her. Wonderful chapter Red.

Ah interesting RedLady. I love your main character Kagura. I wonder what else you are going to do with this.

Col. I can definitly see where you made some changes from version I edited and where you fixed things around from your own version. I really like what you did with the news article part, that very smart. I liked it.

Looking good Red, I'll be waiting to edit the next chapter.

An interesting little story you have here. I'd definitely like to see where this one takes off from. It's interesting and original. I find tons of potential just reading through it.

Good luck with your new story!

Great story ^^