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Reviews For: Briar Doll

Melissa Norvell
2008-02-16
ch 2,
abuseThis keeps getting more and more interesting. Kagura is growing to be my favorite character.
The HG man
2008-02-10
ch 2,
abuseMan, I feel sorry for Kagura. And Yuusuke, and Ryuu, and... Well not so much Kichiro. He was pretty unfazed.
CrazyGirlofManyNames
2008-02-10
ch 2,
abuseOo, boy Kagura wearing dresses, attending contest where boys vie for her, the president having an interest in her. Wonderful chapter Red.
CrazyGirlofManyNames
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseAh interesting RedLady. I love your main character Kagura. I wonder what else you are going to do with this.
The HG man
2008-01-26
ch 1,
abuseCol. I can definitly see where you made some changes from version I edited and where you fixed things around from your own version. I really like what you did with the news article part, that very smart. I liked it.

Looking good Red, I'll be waiting to edit the next chapter.
Melissa Norvell
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseAn interesting little story you have here. I'd definitely like to see where this one takes off from. It's interesting and original. I find tons of potential just reading through it.

Good luck with your new story!
Lyrical Lie
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseGreat story ^^
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