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| Melissa Norvell 2008-02-16 ch 2,  | abuseThis keeps getting more and more interesting. Kagura is growing to be my favorite character. |
| The HG man 2008-02-10 ch 2, | abuseMan, I feel sorry for Kagura. And Yuusuke, and Ryuu, and... Well not so much Kichiro. He was pretty unfazed. |
| CrazyGirlofManyNames 2008-02-10 ch 2, | abuseOo, boy Kagura wearing dresses, attending contest where boys vie for her, the president having an interest in her. Wonderful chapter Red. |
| CrazyGirlofManyNames 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseAh interesting RedLady. I love your main character Kagura. I wonder what else you are going to do with this. |
| The HG man 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseCol. I can definitly see where you made some changes from version I edited and where you fixed things around from your own version. I really like what you did with the news article part, that very smart. I liked it. Looking good Red, I'll be waiting to edit the next chapter. |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting little story you have here. I'd definitely like to see where this one takes off from. It's interesting and original. I find tons of potential just reading through it. Good luck with your new story! |
| Lyrical Lie 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseGreat story ^^ |