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| Samantha Marie Haven 2008-02-10 ch 2,  | abuseWow this was quite good!! I love the opening of the first chapter, it makes it impossible to not read the rest!! and i was glad i read the rest because realized that your writing style is not only incredibly fluent, but there's something deep about it. I really feel like i'm "in" the story, which is saying a lot, because that's not as easy as it may seem, and u just have a knack for it ^^ just one question: this takes place in Victorian England? I wasn't completely clear on tht, but the rest of it was good ;) happy writing!! |
| Mercyette 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, I have to say you have a really interesting peice here. I've never really read anything quite like it. Kudos! The only thing I'm a l,ittle confused about is why they perform if they have a chance to get caught and killed for it? But then again, maybe that's how you want it to be? Hm, very interesting nonetheless. Can't wait to read more and see what happens. I hope they don't get caught! |