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wolfen princess 2009-08-29 . chapter 2
Nice, you can really relate to Tom though I didn't really get the Tom-ness reference. Was I supposed to? Oh well, it was nice and I hope you update soon.

~Wolfen Princess
StoicCrying 2008-12-14 . chapter 2
Wait...who's the pairing?


update sooN!
xXwild-childXx 2008-01-31 . chapter 2
dude this story's really good. please write more way way way longer chapters. thanks.
Koi19 2008-01-29 . chapter 2
nice first chapter. least it was longer then the prologue, lol.
update soon so i can review soon. ^^ till then
Somewhere In Between 2008-01-29 . chapter 2
I loic this.. it's definately a different side of Tom that we're seeing.

Oh and you said that Angela is Matt's future daughter in law.. but I don't think thats right. I think if you have a kid and the kid marries someone the person they marry becomes your daughter/son in law. I could be wrong though.. that or just very confused at what you're getting at ahaha

but yeah, me likes!

--Alex
Esquirella 2008-01-29 . chapter 2
Poor Tom's got a raw deal going here. What's next?
King-Cormorant 2008-01-28 . chapter 2
Nice job! Brady sounds kinda like one of my friends...who isn't even gay. I feel bad for Tom...Matt better suddenly decide he's really, really gay or I'm gonna have to cry... Or I'd just suggest you get Brady to slap him. Looking forward to your next update!

~Dawn
Esquirella 2008-01-28 . chapter 1
Too teasy ... GIMME MORE!
Somewhere In Between 2008-01-25 . chapter 1
You are ebil. Yes thats right, ebil xP but this is an interesting little twister thinger mabob (I am so descriptive.. mirrherher) and a good idea. it'll prolly add to the "AFAM experience" too xP excited for you know, an actually chapter xP

--Alex
Koi19 2008-01-25 . chapter 1
i definetly feel teased all right, but im intrigued. see ya next chap ^^
Sara Frisch 2008-01-25 . chapter 1
Well, I think it's a nice start.
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