You - you - you nearly made me cry. I know it's been six years but still . . . -Sighs-. Love the fic anyway, Daft Punk rocks

...wow. I think that's one of the most depressing stories I've every read. Well, I think it was a very...sad story. Your view point is rather strange and a little confusing, but I think at the same time it works well with the story.
...but why!?? (sob) He loved her! The sadness is overwhelming...
Ahem. Anyway, I think you're doing great! Work on your view point, and you shall have excellent stories and characters in no time!

Okay! Ciao!

Bitten

Smile! :) God loves you!