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| Bi-curious George 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseI'll admit, I didn't understand all of this, like why it seemed that a woman had been murdered, when I thought it'd been a guy O_O. But maybe he's a psychotic serial killer?!? It's true that there were some stylistic features that didn't really like, like putting thoughts in brackets, but that's just a personal preference. Otherwise, just a couple of spelling mistakes to look out for... And some of the imagery, like "Broken shards and a forgotten rag doll" were haunting. Bloody well done. This was awesome :D. |
| relapse into change 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, this is brilliant. i like how you formatted it and stuff. it's so elegant and beautiful and yeah, i'm not really good at giving 'intelligent' reviews that sounds smart or anything since i probably spelled intelligent wrong and am NOT smart but yeah i loved this. this is totally random but i really want to say something disturbing and disgusting and have nothing to do with the story tight now but i'll stop myself. ;D love it. |
| she smolders 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseWatching Sweeney Todd a few weeks ago affected me a lot too. This was just amazing. |
| kelsi bones 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is beautiful and breath taking and tragic and amazing. This style works really well for you, and it's amazing to read. I can't wait to read something else like this from you =] k.X |