It's very well written, but I think this might be plagiarism as this is the basic concept and story to the upcoming movie "The Eye".

I'm not sure if that movie is out yet, but it does look like you pretty much stole it.

If you didn't, it is a good story, and that's all I really have to say.

As usual, your stories are absolutely beautiful! You describe things in such detail... It's just amazing! Great job!