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Johannas mirror
2008-03-14
ch 1,
abuseThis is
most excelent
and thematically similar to one of my poems
but if i post it
someone will point the copyright gun at me
and shoot
even though
im innocent

dont taze me bro
Katie Saychiadu
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseThis reminds me of my childhood
Scribe Of All Trades
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseLove the imagery in this. In a darkly humorous way, this would be amusing in an anti-smoking campaign.
epsilon103
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseI agree Smoking is terrible
All it does is hurt people
The U.S. should just ban that terrible smelling cancer
Its poluting our nation and destroying everyone
creepy kiss on tuesday
2008-01-28
ch 1,
abuseS-s-s-sensual. =]

I like it.

Cigarettes are bad. Smoke's for dead blokes.
Ghost Planet
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI like this poem. It's well written. I don't smoke, and don't support smoking, because both my parents do it and I hate it, but this is really well written, as I said before. Good work.

Keep writing.

-x-Eilish, aka Insanity's Best Friend.
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