great chapter and sweet jasmine finally opened up 2 him and gah hes gonna walk out in2 the sun

Love the story, but the past, present and character's P.O.V is really starting to ** me off, maybe you should have chapters as past and then gradually move to the present as it's a bit hard to follow

hey love this chapter hope u can write more soon

dude great chapter i wodner what they are going to do to carmen

hey love this chapter hope u can write more soon

As always another great chapter, I liked the cliffhanger at the end.

awesome chapter i wonder what they are going to do 2 lorenzo cant wait for the next chapter:)

**! i knew it! i knew it! i knew it!
i knew he was gonna cause trouble!
they're in deep ** now lets hope they catch lorenzo before he tells!!
update soon!

interesting beginning. your characters seem interesting...as are most of your grammar errors too. you might want to get a beta. =]

wow, eric got really upset. but then again if he loves her so much why wont he let her make a decision on what to do with her life? at least he appologized...

update soon!

Eric was such a jerk in this chapter, but I guess it was understandable since vampires are very grouchy when they wake up. Hopefully they'll be able to trust one another more. Thanks for updating, I'll make sure I review every chapter from now on, lol. This story is too good so I hope everyone reviews!!

yay everything is alright with them and great chapter

aw come on you've got to keep going with the story its so good pluse you cant leave the last up date like that and leave up hanging pleasepleaseplease continue with this story :( :)

lol tricky tricky more chapters:)

hello Dear! sorry i haven't been able to review. stuff happened. wont do it again please don't be mad n please update soon!!
love ya
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