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| Whisper of the Winds 2008-01-26 ch 1,  | abuseWhoa... I love the descriptions of her father as "the monster". I also loved the way you described Jamie when she was running...I felt like I could see it. And I also loved the way you described practically everything else in this piece... |
| monsterpetals 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseamazing ! |