okay so basically this was a one night stand? you may say that ydk what youre doing but this was still well written to me. keep up the good work!

That was really intense and very well-written, good stuff man.

I loved it! Are you sure that you don't know what you're doing? because I thought this was amazing! The descriptions, the characters, and the dialogue all fit perfectly into the story, and the ending was good. Nice job! ^.^

~Dawn