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| Purpose 2008-03-28 ch 1,  | abuseI'm sorry you were feeling down. It's good to keep writing though, get all those feelings down on paper and out of you. And just so you know the last two lines not ryhming actually go well with the poem. All the stuff about the light rhymes kind of giving it a glow but then it ends abruptly with no rhyme when you suddenly focus on the darkness. I think it fits. |
| LeeDarien 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abusevery moving. i know exactly how you feel. i've been down a while now so your poem really means something to me. i guess this is why i haven't been writing for a while...i think it flows great. keep it up. |
| HaloPrincess725 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseGreat great great! Keep writing! |