I;m really sad that you're deleting this story. I like it and would've loved to see where it went. hopefully I'll like your rewrite. peace

It's pretty alright. I think it could be improved (not that I know what needs improving) but it's pretty good. Continue quickly please!

Hahaha! Great chapter. i'm still wondering why you have only one reviewer so far...this story is good!
Hmm, oh well update soon!!

Yeah. But i feel like the ending is a little bit rushed..
anyways, I like it..lets see if I love it in the future. :)
Update soon!