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| Tragedy of Light and Dark 2008-09-16 ch 7,  | abuseFamily time with the Suzukis. A plan to steal Chimiri's soul, weird dreams and boy love! Nothing like Poison Ice for ya! It's a good addition to lovely things that make my world go around. Keep on writing! You're amazing! |
| Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-09-16 ch 7, | abuseThere was quite a bit of dialouge here but nothing too bad. You're explaining things very well and we've finally seen ISamu make a come back. It's about time since the story is supposed to be about him. I look forward to your next chapter. You have a really good story here. |
| Dark Angel Hiroshima 2008-09-16 ch 7, | abuseFor some reason I reviewed chapter 5 and not 4...Oh well I read everything over anyway. This story is really good. I wonder what part Xylos and the other guy will play. Update soon! |
| Dark Angel Hiroshima 2008-09-16 ch 5, | abuseThis was a good chapter! Sorry I'm so behind but I felt I should leave a review! I really love your story so far! *goes on to next chapter* |
| Dark Kurogane 2008-09-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseGreat chapter! Not much to say because all people did here was talk. I hope we get some action next time around. I want to see more of your two new characters. |
| Dark Kurogane 2008-09-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis was a good chapter. Isano was definitely not pleased with what had happened. I also hope Atsumori can learn to respect his family more. Please continue! |
| Utena Himemiya 2008-09-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseWow, Akuhito and Atsumori actually did it. I didn't think Atsumori would, especially because he was so skeptical. Besdies, he can't be skeptical after he's done it, lol. This keeps getting better and better. |
| Utena Himemiya 2008-09-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis was a really good chapter. Sorry for not reading it sooner but I was gone. Now I'm back and I shall go on to the next chapter! |
| Iruka-sama 2008-09-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseSolistice is my idol! I love those types of men, so you'll have to excuse me. He reminds me a lot of Zagato from Magic Knight Rayearth, especially the temperament and long, sexy black hair. I hope Akuhito can prove that he really loves Atsumori as well. They are cute together. |
| SilverIsamu 2008-09-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseNo author's notes? Well, that's odd for you. I wonder what will happen between Chimiri and Isamu now. I wan't to know more about Xylos and Solistice too. |
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-09-16 ch 7, anon. | abuseLotsa talkin' in this chapter. *sounds like Byakko* Bya-chan! *glomp* He's such a loving husband...*steals him from Ortega, who chases her with a baseball bat and looks like she has rabies* Well, you have a good chapter here but she's gaining on me so I must go! *runs for dear life* |
| Melissa Norvell 2008-09-16 ch 7, | abuseThe one-legged kitten comment still cracks me up, as well as the 'crotching' mistake, lol. Solstice and Xylos are awesome and I can't wait for your next chapter! I hope you'll review some of my works. |
| Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2008-07-11 ch 6, anon. | abuseI just wanted to make you have 50 reviews! W00t for mindless being able to post more then one time becuse your ananymous! YAYZ! Now update soon! Bai~ |
| Dark Angel Hiroshima 2008-07-07 ch 6, | abuseGood job. I can't wait to see what Isano has planned. |
| Kurogane Black Ninja 2008-07-07 ch 6, | abuseLol I love Ortega. She's so funny! Isano and Taigumo's relationship interest me as well. I wonder what will happen with Isamu... |