I really like the beginning, where Isamu sees Chimiri and everything. That was an awesome chapter! Please update soon!

Wow, this was fabulous! I really loved how you pulled everything together. I'm interested about Geishou/Isano/Taigumo's relationship with each other and I'm really liking OnyxXIsamu.

I don't like Isamu's mother 0_0 she bitchy and snake like, but I feel so sorry for Isamu TT

0_0 that is a long ass yet awesome prologue, I liked Isamu and Chirmi )

I am totally a fan or OrtegaByakko and OnyxIsamu now. I also like Isano with her flashback lover. I'd like to know more about him as well.

This chapter was just as good as the last and your writing is brilliant. I get a new sense for your characters as well. I really like the way they are written here. You both did a marvelous job on this story.

Beautiful chapter. It's nice to see you writing on your own. I really enjoyed your style, especially after I read your three shot story about Araki and Kusarigane. You have a wonderful style that I enjoy and love.

I'm loving Onyx and Isamu all the more now.

I want to know who the person is! Please update soon so I can know!

I wonder who that man is. Somehow, I think it's Chimiri/Bitch Lady. Yes, she is Bitch Lady to me. It's nice to finally see an update on this story! I've always loved reading it and I'm always super excited to see it up and running again.

Please update sooner!

I think Xylos needs a lover. XD. I absolutely LOVE him and he always seems so stressed or sad about something. I'd like to know more about him.

I might also note that I like SolisticeXIsano. I hope you will put Xylos with someone in this story. I want to know more about him and his role. I'd like to think that he's more then just some faceless lackey of Isano's.

Interesting development of relationships and the building up of the pasts of several characters. I really like the background of Isano and Atsumori's parents. I also like Onyx and Isamu's growing relationship. They are turning into one of my favorite couples here.

It's good to see you writing your own story. This way you have the correct feel for the characters, since they are all yours. It's nice to see your writing as well. You're a great author and I really liked this chapter. Things are getting intense and I can't wait until your next one comes out! Please hurry and update!

It's nice to see you writing your own works. I did get confused when I didn't see any ending author's notes, lol.

All in all, this chapter was wonderful. I love the way you write and I'd definitely read more of your stuff! I hope you update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I can't believe I didn't review this but now I definitely am. I really like the in-depth relationship of Ortega and Byakko. They've come a long way since the beginning of the story and it's hard to believe that you're only on chapter 11. Speaking of, I'm going to go and give you a review on that too, since I read it a long time ago.