Me too, I wonder what he'll think. Great poem. I hope writing makes you feel a little better. Never quit. Great job as well!

Kristie Marie

Oh wow. Can I give you a hug? A lot of this is true for me, I can't even begin to tell you.

Hmm...Are really all of these good news? Because many of them are so sad...

I like how you write everything off, although it would've been better if it had rhymed. Your setup with the short sentences is good! I like how you give the poem that kind of feeling with such short sentences!

Keep it up!

The Reverse Edge Blade

I'd love to come kick some freshmen ass for you, but I'm afraid I am about 300 miles south. Sorry dear.

Great piece, as always

Aw, very bittersweet, but it makes my heart ache. I've written things like this before when things seem like they're about to fall apart...((author favorited)).

DeAnna