Reviews for Midnight Moonlight

Arith 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseAutumn, why do you leave us on a cliffhanger!? not fair! :P
HollyBlair 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abusePretty good, Flare. I think you should check out the formatting, though, because something's just not quite right about it. Formatting issues aside, it's a great story, and I can't wait to see where it goes.
KnittingKneedle 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseHi I'm with the review marathon! You've spelt mechanically and fascinating wrong, but they were the only real spelling errors that I spotted. The paragraphs were very short and oddly set out on the page, I think I would have preferred some more descriptions- though I liked that you started with some action...The story seemed very fragmented and I think you need to work on the flow and the passage of time, try not to use capitalisation to show reacions and instead describe features and actions so you are showing a reader and not just telling them. You provided a reader with a lot of questions to keep them reading which was good...
Jenna 2008-01-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseInteresting, I would like to read more.