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| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis is wonderful. I love the parentheses as commentary, and the ending is fabulous. Very sad, and makes me want to know the story behind it. |
| Unforgettably-Uniquely Me 2008-06-10 ch 1, | abuseI feel like I can relate to this so much, it's sad. =( Nice work with this piece. |
| perpetual questions 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseI like the sad directness and the effective simplicity here. Nice. |
| HauntedMisery 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI can relate to this poem so much. I adore it...very well written. Thanks for the review on my poem as well, and no it isn't about me. haha. |
| adsaige 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseas usual i understand such deep emotional poetry in short lines. keep up the good work. |