Reviews for With Chocolate Maids

ServalSpotz 2008-02-25 ch 1,	abuse(In zombielike voice) chocolate! Who doesn't love chocolate? Lovely poem. Thanks for the review.
fatbird33 2008-02-22 ch 1,	abuseYAY CHOCOLATE!! good job
kristen fowler 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseATP for the human soul. Hallelujah to the poor souls who are afflicted with the knowledge of adenosine triphosphate. God help us all. With chocolate. Amen. P.S. I'm just reading down your page of authored stories, and I love all of it. I restrain from commenting on EVERYTHING though. You'd become sick of me.
simpleplan13 2008-01-27 ch 1,	abuseI love this piece.. maybe because I love chocolate... the imagery you have is amazing and so unique.. the part that seemed odd to me was "eschewing/the chewable" the repetition of chew seemed odd to me, but other that it was an amazing piece that totally made me want chocolate.. lol PS Do I not sound like a girl?