aw

I hate to be critical - but it would help if you would capitalize. I don't even want to write out all the little errors that I found, so I'll correct the last paragraph.

START: it may not have been a life changing night but right now at 235 am when my hair is still wet from the rain and i’m wearing borrowed clothes that smell like him, it just seems really right.

FINISH: It may not have been a life changing night, but right now, at 2:35 a.m., when my hair is still wet from the rain and I'm wearing borrowed clothes that smell like him, it just seems really right.

"Really right" sounds wrong. I'd remove the "really". What more can I say? That's just how I'd write it, but I'm not perfect at where commas go and all that. So you have room for improvement, and I suggest you start with capitalization and grammar. If you just did that, it would make the story a heck of a lot better, and then you'll be well on your way!

Sorry if I sounded harsh. ):

you are so gorgeous.
did this really happen?
i want it to have happened.

love you for always,
val

aw wifey that's really cute. lucky boy.

Um, wow. Piggy backing in the rain and holding an umbrella over both of you? Cutest thing ever! Did this really happen? Oh, and I hate to nitpick, but in the fist sentence you should have used "their" instead of "they're". Anyway- this was really cool. Much love.

cute