this is incredible
it feels so authentic, like part of something much bigger than a poem

the whole idea of being with a ghost or satan or a combination is really interesting and the way you describe the whole thing is absolutely beautiful.. I really like the repetition at the end... awesome piece

like i said before:

its like cotton candy
it melts in your mouth

the imagery is evident in every line

its almost as if your angry, even though this poem feels calm

very very good. i liked it :)

ah cara this is amazing!
it's so pretty, especially the last quatrain.

Wow. I thoroughly enjoyed that. I'm not sure the format is perfect for it but I really liked it regardless. Bravo/Brava!