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IlfirinEstel
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseI lovelove this. It's so how I feel at the moment. It sucks having someone have that power over you when you know that they're not good for you. "there should be laws against/nervous energy like that." indeed.
smile for the sunshine
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abusei really like this. verry cute and honest and prettiful. = ]
generically beautiful
2008-01-27
ch 1,
abuseOh, but this *is* poetry. It isn't rhyme or rhythm or coherence that makes a poem. It's feeling. And this has feeling.

(And your line breaks are brilliantly placed, by the way. I thought you should know.)

-Christine
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