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| IlfirinEstel 2008-03-04 ch 1, | abuseI lovelove this. It's so how I feel at the moment. It sucks having someone have that power over you when you know that they're not good for you. "there should be laws against/nervous energy like that." indeed. |
| smile for the sunshine 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abusei really like this. verry cute and honest and prettiful. = ] |
| generically beautiful 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseOh, but this *is* poetry. It isn't rhyme or rhythm or coherence that makes a poem. It's feeling. And this has feeling. (And your line breaks are brilliantly placed, by the way. I thought you should know.) -Christine |