I wish there was more of a conclusion with Hailey. She really doesn't seem that terrible.

But overall, i really enjoyed the story. it was cute!

Perfect! Perfect ending to the chapter! I love this story, for real. I think its pretty much tied with Stranger things have Happened, which is the greatest story ever by the way!

Wow! i woke up super early this morning and thought about this story, and here I am at 6am reading. Great job

excellent chapter

aww. i love it! tristan's so sweet. great job!

Um, so I already read this long before and I'm not sure whether I reviwed a not. If not, i'm sorry ( i'm really lazy)

But anyway, I love it! It's awesome. And I'm adding it to my C2.

you are awesome!

The sharing is for squares and im a circle line is absolutly great! me and my friend use it all the time! haha. love the story!

piercings, huh? interesting.

piercings aren't that painful. i have four and they didn't hurt at all. i was literally saying, "It's over? Already? Huh?"

i just re-read my review right now and saying four piercings like that sounds pretty hectic. but, no, not really. i just have two on each ear. it's not too flashy.

well, before i went off on my rant, i was about to say that i liked the chapters so far. and tristan isn't really much like edward cullen so im impressed.

great job!

leah, jacob and bella? isn't this turning into a bit of a twilight remake?

well, i happen to like twilight but im interested in seeing what individuality an author has. i like your writing style and so im hoping edward's and alice's won't be appearing in the story.

well, keep writing... even though you have already finished this story...

This story is amazing! my friend recommended me to this and i fell in love with it instantly!

omfg..
I'm absolutely, positively, one-hundred percent sure that I completely and undeniably LOVE this story and can most undoubtedly re-read this story more than once.
Its been so long since I've read a story I liked this much; no scratch that. I've NEVER liked a story this much.

I don't care that this situation has been played on a million times with the same result. The character development, the writing the feeling the EVERYTHING is unique.

at least she got her happy ending!

Omg, that was TOTALLY FRICKIN AHH-MAZING!!
One of my fave stories ever! Everything about it was just perfect, really.

you've got me wanting myself a Tristan! i love this story ;p