FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Take the Money and Run 2008-02-23 ch 1,  | abuseHa, I went to Barnes & Noble for Harry Potter 7 at midnight too :) i know you aren't expecting reviews, but i just wanted to point out a couple things, at the very beginning, the first sentence, you should change it a bit because you use the word "before" twice. And in the story you typed "gold" instead of "hold". Ahh...i wish the series wasn't really over. at least there will be the encyclopedia. Im sure you and Lori were very happy :) |
| theBeautifulNightmare 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abusehaha! Your experience is somewhat similar to mine :) Isn't it the saddest feeling to think that it's over? HARRY POTTER 4 LIFE! |