This was really beautiful. Short and simple, but well done.

Aww thats so sad.
It reminded me of my grandmother who died
Good
But SAd

wow...I really like this. Wonderful job.
Faith

This is very moving.

The first two lines are breathtaking. I love the comparison there - 'cheeks folded into pages'. The image is clear and haunting in my head.

It's as though you can feel her pain.

that's really sad. i'm sorry if it's true.