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| Jeweline 2008-02-01 ch 1,  | abuseAw, precious. Cute, sweet and hotness in one fic. Beautiful A three-part? are you still up to it? Would love to see you complete it. :] |
| Faith Adeline 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseI liked it. Very good. Keep it up, I can't wait to see more :) Faith |
| Tortured Breath 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow. . . I really like this and it will be interesting to see where you take it. The way that you capture the characters emotions is very good. I can relate mostly because I am in a relationship right now where if he were ever to die I would probably follow close behind. Bonds like that don't come around often but when they do they effect your greatly. Great work. There are a few typos in the begging. Just a few easy fixes that you should look into. Just a thought of course. Keep up the good work. ~Dark Angel |