This is interesting... I see that it's a one-shot, but it's so intriguing that it would be awesome as a full-story. I like the italicized dialogue.

it was good! i liked it, some big words and a teensy bit confusing, but thats cause i'm not smart :) and y are they eunuchs?

Ah, I love this! Nice work.
-June

Wow, I've never read a better description of an apricot in my life! lol
Kudos to you, hon.

-Ramen