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| cup of glee and sparkles 2008-06-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis is interesting... I see that it's a one-shot, but it's so intriguing that it would be awesome as a full-story. I like the italicized dialogue. |
| Beluga1 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseit was good! i liked it, some big words and a teensy bit confusing, but thats cause i'm not smart :) and y are they eunuchs? |
| June Hart 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseAh, I love this! Nice work. -June |
| Ramenluver 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, I've never read a better description of an apricot in my life! lol Kudos to you, hon. -Ramen |