love this. so peaceful and simple. i could picture you on the sidewalk gazing up at the stars, it was very good.

the flow of this piece is great... the warm/cold contrast was really great and I love the things you bolded... the ending was also very pwoerful

The last two lines really bring this piece together. I don't have much to say on this, but I liked it.

-stix-

This one is pretty too.

i like how this is a sort of uplifting piece... it's not really "angsty" even though it kind of is. and it's not really sad, either, which is refreshing.

i wonder why you bolded the words you did... i didn't catch on to any sort of pattern (well, up and rock bottom, but what about kiss?)

overall, pretty well written. you have some nice images in there. good job!

-Lefty (from the review marathon hosted by the review game forum - link on my profile page)

Man, I love your work.

-Flare