I think I like it better without the cuz. More polished. I love this one, something that most people can relate too.

sweet! adding to favs.

by the way, i think the commas are better than the "cuz". commas make it seem more incomplete-ish which makes it a better poem.

love,

pockets

Ok. What happened? And I like this poem. Keep writing!

Kristie Marie

Oh my. I thought this was amazing. Really. Really. Oh my. I think I would have liked the "cause" in there. But then I liked it the way it was. I don't know (oh, look at that), I just loved it.