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| Natalie Page 2008-03-23 ch 1,  | abuseI know the syllable can be flexible (10 or 11) but I'm not sure if some of these lines are intentionally 11. The poem itself is very good, and I hate to be picky on the technical stuff, but are you using the more flexible form? |