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| 1Wanderer 2008-01-27 ch 1,  | abuseI think the inclusion of "debt" and "loans" adds an entirely different dimension to the poem. Personally, I think a better word choice for those two would make the poem flow better; however, the poem itself was fantastic. I love the tying together of music and love into one entity. well done. |